63 sallon mein ek hi cheej ko aisa paya hai jo bheed-bhaav nahi kar raha hai,
Khud bhi jaante ho tum bharastachaar se har bhartiya kahin na kahin mar raha hai..
Meine har roj har kissi ki jubaan se sunna hai ki mera deesh toh bharastachaar ka kuaan hai,
Par kya karuun ki sattya(truth) sattya hote hue bhi ansunna hai,
Yahaan toh jhoot kekhilaaf awaaz uthaana bhi gunaah hai..
Par aaj jo anna ne sapna bunaah hai,
Ek rooshni ki kiran ko meine deekha punaah hai..
Aaj fir mere deshwaasi mujhe bharastachaar se mukti dilawaana chatein hain,
Dusroon ko toh vidaa kab ka kar diya, par ab mujhe apnoo se bachana chahtein hain..
Is desh par jab jab anyaay(unjustice) bada hai,
Koi na koi desh ka laal mere liye sadaa mujhe khadaa mila hai..
Uthoo desh waasiyoon ki mein tumhe uthata hoon,
Tum bus prayatan(effort) karo, phir se Bharat ko soone ki chidiyaa banane ka mein wishvaas dilata hoon..
Jai Hind……. Sumit Khatri, MBA Student IBS Hyderabad

fantastic work, sumit
ReplyDeletevery well written sumit
ReplyDeleteawesone work.....keep writing....
ReplyDeletegreat work as usual ..... keep it up dude..
ReplyDeleteWith hiccups here and there, I finished reading it. Awesome :)
ReplyDeleteI don't know why people above liked it but I found it too much irritating.
ReplyDeletePlease don't send these kind of things to me again.
Sorry
very good job bud..keep it up..u ve a talent...nourish it to d finest level...
ReplyDelete@all thanks a lot, really appreciate :)
ReplyDeleteI would like to share one more update, i posted this poem to Mr. Chetan Bhagat too and he mailed me back saying he liked it. :)
@Sourabh Sir, sorry for inconvenience caused.
KYA BAAT HAI SUMIT.............. THATS REALLY VERY NICE. AWSOME WORK. KEEP UP THE GD WORK :)
ReplyDelete@Pravesh thanks a lot buddy :) sure will do :)
ReplyDeleteI am proud that you are my student...Jai Hind
ReplyDeleteAppreciated
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ReplyDelete@Sanjit Sir thanks a lot... Gr8 to have you as my teacher :) Jai Hind
ReplyDelete@Suman Thanks buddy :)
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